As I look back upon the body of work I have created this semester, I am somewhat surprised at how much of myself is revealed in what I had to say about a variety of unrelated topics. For the most part, I represented myself in a fairly accurate fashion, or, I should clarify, I represented the feelings and beliefs I had at the time in a fairly accurate fashion. Even though I would argue that I have not gone through some drastic change in the last few months, the “little” changes have been numerous. Altogether, they have compelled me to become a more mature, knowledgeable person. And it would be my hope that from this time onward, what I write and what I have to say would reflect this. I believe our writing can help us recognize who we are and re-reading our own texts written in an earlier time can also reveal to us who we were. Every time we create a text, we create it as a different person. We establish our ethos, or credibility, by revealing this to others.
For instance, in my first assignment I chronicled how I reacted to a certain advertisement by AXE Body Wash. I analyzed how the ad was supposed to make me feel and looked closely at how I actually responded. I came to the conclusion that the AXE ads would more than likely “appeal to a younger man who has not had the good sense yet to think the whole thing out.” Before I wrote the “Am I This Man?” essay, I was that younger man, but the assignment itself compelled me to study the appeal of the advertisement closely. But after re-reading my work, I wondered if I had really felt driven to come to the conclusions that I had and if the mood I had presented to the audience was a real one. At the time, I appeared to be upset and offended by the AXE campaign, but today the whole concept of a body wash ad rousts very little emotion in me and lots of apathy. I am obviously not the same person who wrote that first essay. In our next assignment, I was even more enthusiastic in my arguments. When I wrote “The Video Game Revolution: Why Americans Need the Scary, the Criminal, the Confrontational and the Violent,” I felt great attachment to my thesis and I believe my great love and general excitement for recreational gaming was obvious. I still feel that way, but, nevertheless, if I had to write another essay on that very topic today, my reasons for supporting the art of gaming would be radically different.
Oftentimes, authors establish their ethos, their trustworthiness as a writer, without even noticing it. I found this to be true in my own writing. I consider myself a loving, energetic individual, but when I write, especially for an assignment that will be graded, I often struggle to subdue some of my energy, all of my prejudices, and the knee-jerk reactions that we all are guilty of making. I want to appear clear-headed, intelligent, all-knowing, full of good humor, loving of all , blessed with all the right answers and, if at all possible, good-looking. Did I establish such an ethos in my writing this semester? I doubt it. Sometimes my elusive ethos was so subtle I had a hard time noticing it. But every now and then, when I had just the right thing to say and the exact turn of phrase, I found that my writing allowed me to share what I consider the best of myself with others. I actually found that my ethos was most appealing, seemingly the most true and good and right, when I wrote what I really thought and tried to impress my audience the least.
I suppose, in conclusion, I have to say that our writings should almost always be an expression of our true, inner selves. This is what establishes ethos and what helps us connect to our audience. Unfortunately, our true self today will often not be our same true self of tomorrow. Every day our life changes us in some small way. Before we know it, we are a completely different person and what we write will reflect that. But this only means that we can never write the same thing twice and that what we create when we do write can only be described as a one-of-a-kind, all-out original.
Friday, May 14, 2010
Monday, May 10, 2010
My Day without Technology
Today, on Monday the 10th of May, I have chosen to go my day without using my cellphone. I thought this would be a great Idea. Its finals week, and what I should be doing is studying. I was going to just give up my phone for the day and be able to really get some of the studying done that I had to do. It sounds like a great plan.
I woke up around 9 in the morning and went to the gym. I kind of viewed this day as just something I had to be done with as quickly as possible, so I was going to try to fill it with activities and studying. After that I started studying, and studying. I didnt realize how boring actually studying for hours upon hours was. I had like 3 in me until I was done. I then went to get some food. It was at this point around 1:30.
While eating, I happened to meet with my good friend David. I the nspent the rest of the afternoon hanging with David. I realize that happening upon my friends was basically the only method I had to contact them.
Around 8, I went back to my room and, once again, began my studying.
Before I embarked on this assignment, I didnt really think it would be that hard, but I now see how very wrong I was. I need my contactsd to other people. Without that, my life is just extremely boring. I will never take my phone, or for that matter my friends, for granted Again.. -Vneck Biker
I woke up around 9 in the morning and went to the gym. I kind of viewed this day as just something I had to be done with as quickly as possible, so I was going to try to fill it with activities and studying. After that I started studying, and studying. I didnt realize how boring actually studying for hours upon hours was. I had like 3 in me until I was done. I then went to get some food. It was at this point around 1:30.
While eating, I happened to meet with my good friend David. I the nspent the rest of the afternoon hanging with David. I realize that happening upon my friends was basically the only method I had to contact them.
Around 8, I went back to my room and, once again, began my studying.
Before I embarked on this assignment, I didnt really think it would be that hard, but I now see how very wrong I was. I need my contactsd to other people. Without that, my life is just extremely boring. I will never take my phone, or for that matter my friends, for granted Again.. -Vneck Biker
Sunday, May 9, 2010
Sometimes the Previews are better than the movie
This last thursday, I and geoup of friends decided to take a break from studying and other studious behaviors to go see the midnight premier of IronMan 2, starring Robert Downey Jr.. put it simply, the movie was exceptionally satifying. I loved almost every second of it, but after it was over, I wasnt very excited about the movie. What I was really pumped about were the handfull of coming attractions in the beginning..
One of the coming atractions was for Christopher Nolan's new film Inception.. I kind of take a bit of a time out now and explain who Chris Nolan is and how much I love him. Chris Nolan is the directer of Memento(If you havent seen it, watch it as soon as possible), Batman Begins, and The Dark Knight. To put it shortly, I love him.. His newest fim, Inception, is set to be released July 16 of this year, I dont believe there are words in the tongues of men that can start to describe how excited I am(ask me about Inceotion and I will literally talk Forever). one of the coolest things about this movie is that everyone involed with it has been extreamely quite about the movies content. all the public basically has to go by arethe trailers. So, For Ironman 2, Nolan released a brand new trailer for Inception showing the people never before seen footage and even revieling a few plot points. To say the very least, it was awe-inspiring. I was in the theater and every ten seconds I would raise my hands and Shake with excitement and aticipation.. By the way, Here is a link to that trailer http://www.traileraddict.com/trailer/inception/theatrical-trailer
Leaving the theater, even though the movie was really quite good, I felt nothing but excitement over getting to see Inception in a few months. I felt a little bad that I had just seen this great movie and a two and a half minute trailer was what I was excited about.. I guess sometimes the previws can be the best part.. -Vneck Biker
One of the coming atractions was for Christopher Nolan's new film Inception.. I kind of take a bit of a time out now and explain who Chris Nolan is and how much I love him. Chris Nolan is the directer of Memento(If you havent seen it, watch it as soon as possible), Batman Begins, and The Dark Knight. To put it shortly, I love him.. His newest fim, Inception, is set to be released July 16 of this year, I dont believe there are words in the tongues of men that can start to describe how excited I am(ask me about Inceotion and I will literally talk Forever). one of the coolest things about this movie is that everyone involed with it has been extreamely quite about the movies content. all the public basically has to go by arethe trailers. So, For Ironman 2, Nolan released a brand new trailer for Inception showing the people never before seen footage and even revieling a few plot points. To say the very least, it was awe-inspiring. I was in the theater and every ten seconds I would raise my hands and Shake with excitement and aticipation.. By the way, Here is a link to that trailer http://www.traileraddict.com/trailer/inception/theatrical-trailer
Leaving the theater, even though the movie was really quite good, I felt nothing but excitement over getting to see Inception in a few months. I felt a little bad that I had just seen this great movie and a two and a half minute trailer was what I was excited about.. I guess sometimes the previws can be the best part.. -Vneck Biker
Monday, May 3, 2010
The Most Effectively Placed Swearing of All Time
My friend colin had been trying to gety me to watch the film In the Loop for about a month. He would tell me that it was one of the funniest movies he had seen. But I was still skeptical, because when I would ask him what it was about, he would tell me,"You just have to see it dude. Trust me." Well, last night I finally trusted Colin enough to actually watch the film. And to my amazement, it WAS one of the funniest films I had perhaps ever seen. Usually, I am fully against telling "why a movie is funny." Partly because humor is subjective, but also because I think it is also sacred. We shouldnt dissect What makes certain things funny, but back to my point. Im sorry to break my code hear, but what makes In the Loop so funny is the swearing. The curse words in the film are so effectively, and not to mention inventively, placed that it makes the already hilarious premise of the film ten times better.
Now dont take me wrong, I fully support foul language to be used for comedic purposes. But many timesthey are used as the entire joke, instead of the just an amplifier. If a word is just over used and stretched it takes away from the coedic power it has. In the Loop uses its swearing woth such inventiveness that they are never over done and remain fresh throughout the film. Sadly, other comedies, such as Superbad, The Big Lebowski, or Knocked Up(and please dont think I am bashing these fims, which is why I chose 3 of my all-time favorite comedies), arent able to see the sacredness of their swearing, and much like Icarus flying to close to the sun, these types of films just over use thier cursing and it becomes dull. Im hoping that comedies of the future are able to learn from such films as In the Loop and respect their swearing and view them as the gifts they are..
-Vneck Biker
Now dont take me wrong, I fully support foul language to be used for comedic purposes. But many timesthey are used as the entire joke, instead of the just an amplifier. If a word is just over used and stretched it takes away from the coedic power it has. In the Loop uses its swearing woth such inventiveness that they are never over done and remain fresh throughout the film. Sadly, other comedies, such as Superbad, The Big Lebowski, or Knocked Up(and please dont think I am bashing these fims, which is why I chose 3 of my all-time favorite comedies), arent able to see the sacredness of their swearing, and much like Icarus flying to close to the sun, these types of films just over use thier cursing and it becomes dull. Im hoping that comedies of the future are able to learn from such films as In the Loop and respect their swearing and view them as the gifts they are..
-Vneck Biker
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